"..extravagant, frivolous proof..."Nice!
Fun and cheery...I like the party vibe that exudes from this poem. Nicely done!
Good one..
pleasant flow.love it.
Absolutely fabulous, smart poem. Really wonderful imagery; and the message is spot on! Nice Write!Here's Mine:http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/29/indiscretion-now-obsession/
I want to say "Don't we all?", but that is cynical and misses the vulnerability of this moment.
I would love to be courted with such ardor. The detail and word craft in this piece are wonderful!
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"..extravagant, frivolous proof..."
Nice!
Fun and cheery...I like the party vibe that exudes from this poem. Nicely done!
Good one..
pleasant flow.
love it.
Absolutely fabulous, smart poem. Really wonderful imagery; and the message is spot on! Nice Write!
Here's Mine:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/29/indiscretion-now-obsession/
I want to say "Don't we all?", but that is cynical and misses the vulnerability of this moment.
I would love to be courted with such ardor. The detail and word craft in this piece are wonderful!
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