Monday, April 19, 2010

One Single Impression: Mask

Dear Fish

Loved
the feathered mask.
I'll try harder
to pretend
you can fly.

Sincerely,

Bird.

One Single Impression

5 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

Good one. I love when you add your talent to OSI. This is superb.

Marilyn said...

Sandy: I never know if my poetry is any good, but I think I'll keep playing anyway. I enjoy OSI a lot. I don't always get to many of the other participants but when I do it's nice to see how they all thought about the prompt.

gabrielle said...

Beautiful. Reads like a prayer.

Travis said...

Excellent.

Marilyn said...

Gabrielle: Thank you so much.

Travis: Thanks.